The clock tower stands high and mighty among all the other buildings around it, the clock tower remain untainted from anything that was happenng around it, the clock tower stood there as though it was from another universe, untouchable by anything around. This is the Hwa Chong Clock Tower.
The Hwa Chong Clock Tower is as pure as the water running down a mountian stream, it is as natural as an uncut diamond. The Hwa Chong Clock Tower is a place where all student come together to acknowledge the fact that they are fellow Hwa Chongian now regardless of their backgrounds. They were able to make it to this school shows something, they were all of the same characteristic, and have a bright future as leaders of future Singapore.
The Hwa Chong Clock Tower is like a magnet, attracting all the people who have the capabilities to make the cut and at the same time repel others who have not been able to do so. Hwa Chong Clock Tower is like a beacon of hope for all Hwa Chongian as a sign for a better future.
I feel that your post is a little bit unrealistic and somewhat "too good to be true". For example, the sentence "the clock tower remain untainted from anything that was happenng around it." Besides some spelling and grammatical errors, don't you think that after such a long time and with so much history, the clock tower can remain untainted?
ReplyDeleteThere are also some comparisons that do not really make much sense, such as "as natural as an uncut diamond". I feel that there was also an excessive use of the word "like".
However, there are parts of your post where I do have to agree. The Hwa Chong Clock Tower really is a majestic structure and I have no doubt that all of us are extremely proud to be part of Hwa Chong!
Daryl Ware