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Wong Wei Cong's Blog:
http://wongweicong.blogspot.com/2011/02/characterisation-story-excerpt.html#comments
Daryl Ware's Blog:
http://daryls-aware.blogspot.com/2011/02/term-1-week-5-assignment.html#comments
Lua Jiong Wei's Blog:
http://2a116languagearts.blogspot.com/2011/02/characterization-story-excerpt.html#comment-form
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